Ok this is sorta Nanoka's Future Form in Season 2 (that is if i ever get to draw until there zzzz) It's still pretty much in draft form, so i'll upload the inked version when Im done
with it, o and sorry for the scanninng error there XD
Ok nxt is my result for comic weekly 4th submission (nt sure what happened to the 2nd and 3rd submission) ok, this time i got 60 pts XD (better as compared to 48 for the 1st submission) and the comments are :Efforts can be seen to draw this picture, i reccomend drawing the buildings smaller to make the picture have more of a space as it seem cramped, that way the backgrounds would not be as heavy and your characters can stand out more !
Ok lastly the 1st 100 pts for Comic weekly (wow he beat the 92 marks one!) His comments are: Wow! If I dont give a 100 for this i think you might send some gang to whack me up haha. Th 1st 100 marks in readers section has appeared!! A very high-standard piece of work, the usuage of computones and feel is very good. A very detailed piece, however you nd to work more on the character's hand, the left hand can be drawn better, continue to work hard and we hope to see your drawings again !
And tats tat, Haa Wished mine was as gd haha pls remeber to comment!